Not your best, muh dear...it seemed a bit force but it wasn't horrible or anything lol...I actully like the flow of the ending. Keep it up!

It's real good! Like it alot!!! I love the whole journey you speak of in this poem great work!!!

the rhymes in this seemed a little forced. but i still like it. its very sad
~Freak~

Heather what r u talking about thts reli well written, Keep it up, well done, if u get time read some of mine

interesting story with a poetic message

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Just wanted to send you a thank you for being such a wonderful addition to the site & for being so sweet to me....

Bless you
<3Heather M Craig.

wow that is such a sad story, is it true? good work and thanks for commenting on my poem!