Finally

by AnotherJournalEntry   Jun 15, 2005


Alone in a crowded room.
Ignored and abandoned.
Noise surrounding me
But none reaching my head.
Loud groups all around,
Not included at all.

Finally, someone reaches out.
Someone seems to care.
Alone in this crowded world.
Someone to share
All the good and bad.
That someone is God.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mel

    aw i totaly like this one

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    I'm not a spiritual person, but it's good none-the-less.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice job! Like the poem. Keep writing & if u get a chance check out my poems too. Cheers!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydie

    Expressive, it needs a bit more sprit in there, you know a bit more life and spruce... Good usage of words none the less... Continue to write - KEEP AT IT!

    -Lyd

  • 18 years ago

    by jaki

    nice work! it holds so much meaning.. keep writing and always follow your heart

    *jackie*

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