Warrior leader

by Ashelin   Jun 16, 2005


The clang of metal
The smell of blood
The roar of dragons
Blood soaked mud

The call of war
Warriors falling
Healers everywhere
To heal, they are trying

Leaders watch
They rush into battle
Calling out orders
One dives off his saddle

The leader stands
And fights again
Rushing at the enemy
To try and save his men

A dragon soars down
To help the leader
Arrows are shot
Some made of cedar

The dragon roars in pain
Weeling away
The leader grows angry
He shall win this day

** this is the first of a trilogy**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Hmmm....That wasn't too good but it didn't have a final sound to it (which makes it okay to be a trilogy or some such thing) Okay write.
    ~Unforgiven

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Pretty damn good....but not the best...

    ~~Nick~~

    and btw for the comment to Shortcoming Angels...it was all true...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashelin

    :: grins happily:: you think I should make it a trilogy poem? really? I didn't think it was That good...

  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    OOOOH that was SO good!! I really suggest that you make it a trilogy poem, almost like a story. That was really intruiging. 5/5 deffinately.

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

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