My lifes a Mess

by The-Blood-Vile   Jun 16, 2005


My life's a mess
And now its death

Because of you
And what you do

My mind is made
My life will now fade

To go onto death
I think it's best

My life's a mess
And now its death

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    The rhyme scheme flows nicely right up until the 4th stanza where is loses that tightness and flow. It does rhyme, but it's slightly out of flow with the rest of the poem. If can fix that it will be a very good poem indeed.

    Nice effort.

    B

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