The Darkness

by The-Blood-Vile   Jun 16, 2005


The darkness of my life
Has taken over my light
My life is going down hill
From low to now kill

My heart is falling form the sky
To the the deepest part of the Neile

To realize I hate my life
is hard thing to see

Wanting to die
is a feeling every one gets

Needing to die
is completely different

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  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Well i liked it.. Though it does lack rhyming it was deep.. I mean i understood exactly what you were trying to say and you didn't use many words.. Like i said.. Any poem is good as long as it comes from the heart sweets... *hugs*

    ~Jessica

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