by TaSarah
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I have these feelings too, but I have never gone through with the act of actually cutting myself. I dont have the guts to. I really do like your poem though. |
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wow... amazing!!!!! wow... i absolutely love it! very nicely written. you are seriously talented. keep it up!!! |
by LAST RONIN
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I have been there my Texan friend..your pome is like a story from my head.. Very well done.. I have to say I have favrotism to Suicide poems thats wha tI mostly wirte lately.. but my hat off to you.. well done.. keep writing 6.41 on Ronin 6.66 scale |
by Marjan
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wow...This is really so great. it has a good flow. really wonderfull. |
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Great flow and just a great poem all around. keep up the good work m8. -Mike |
by ASPHYXIATED
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wow it was like you were explaining me if that even make sense all i know is that when i read that poem i pulled down my sleeve and covered my arm dunno why just happened....man the poem flowed so well not a single flaw:( i like pointing out flaws j/k...5/5 for sure. |
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This is a very deep poem. i really liked it. Keep it up. |
by Brookeღ
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Very intense! I don't cut but you painted the picture well! Nice detail! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by Kia
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i really really like this poem... i share these feelings and this stanza here i really relate too |
by AJ
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That describes the thoughts and feelings of probablly alot of people. Good job. Very intense, I like it. |
by Jason Meres
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"As it dries I put up the knife and end the hate crime" |
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Omg...this poem is soo awesum i luvd it...it has a lot of meaning...keep up the great work..ill check out some more of ur poems.. |
by Sarah Ann
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Wow...I loved that poem it was very good...The repitition in particular places made it stand out...It was simply magnificent. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. 5/5 xxx |
by †JustAriâ€
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omfg this......cannot be put into words. :D I reeeeeeeeeeeally like it! 5/5 definitely it's very deep...Peace! //ari\\ |
by Marjan
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very beautifully written as I have said |
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I wish i could say something good about this, because it was a good poem. but..i can't. because it reminds me of the way i'm not supposed to be. |
by Sarah Ann
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Very deep, your poem had a strong sense of imagery...like I can actually see it happening. I don't cut but I had thoughts like this at times. Your poems are written with such powerful emotions, it really grabs the reader's attention. |
by Rolo
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Wow. Very powerful. You kept me reading, and the flow was great. Touching and excellent. 5/5. |
by Richard
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wow this is really good i will 5/5 can u read my poem the 1 u commetned scepter of love i delted it was really bad lol i amde new one tis called angel#1 (you being I) please comment thx |
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nicely written. |