Comments : One More Time

  • 18 years ago

    by TaSarah

    I have these feelings too, but I have never gone through with the act of actually cutting myself. I dont have the guts to. I really do like your poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow... amazing!!!!! wow... i absolutely love it! very nicely written. you are seriously talented. keep it up!!!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    I have been there my Texan friend..your pome is like a story from my head.. Very well done.. I have to say I have favrotism to Suicide poems thats wha tI mostly wirte lately.. but my hat off to you.. well done.. keep writing 6.41 on Ronin 6.66 scale

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    wow...This is really so great. it has a good flow. really wonderfull.
    Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    Great flow and just a great poem all around. keep up the good work m8. -Mike

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    wow it was like you were explaining me if that even make sense all i know is that when i read that poem i pulled down my sleeve and covered my arm dunno why just happened....man the poem flowed so well not a single flaw:( i like pointing out flaws j/k...5/5 for sure.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    This is a very deep poem. i really liked it. Keep it up.

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very intense! I don't cut but you painted the picture well! Nice detail! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kia

    i really really like this poem... i share these feelings and this stanza here i really relate too
    Now I must cut more for it to feel the same,
    I must cut more and increase the pain,
    The pain that takes my mind off of love,
    The pain that makes me curse him up above

    its a very well written poem and breath taking cuz its so deep and wow great job

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    That describes the thoughts and feelings of probablly alot of people. Good job. Very intense, I like it.

    ~no more

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    "As it dries I put up the knife and end the hate crime"
    Brilliantly put, simply magnificent.

  • 18 years ago

    by LoVeAbLeShOrTie

    Omg...this poem is soo awesum i luvd it...it has a lot of meaning...keep up the great work..ill check out some more of ur poems..
    *~*evans*lil*hottie*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow...I loved that poem it was very good...The repitition in particular places made it stand out...It was simply magnificent. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. 5/5 xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    omfg this......cannot be put into words. :D I reeeeeeeeeeeally like it! 5/5 definitely it's very deep...Peace! //ari\\

    P.s.- Hey could u go back 2 the doubled deal post and tell me how many you commented on? just so i know how many i need to read.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    very beautifully written as I have said
    before. 5/5
    take care, Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I wish i could say something good about this, because it was a good poem. but..i can't. because it reminds me of the way i'm not supposed to be.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Very deep, your poem had a strong sense of imagery...like I can actually see it happening. I don't cut but I had thoughts like this at times. Your poems are written with such powerful emotions, it really grabs the reader's attention.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Wow. Very powerful. You kept me reading, and the flow was great. Touching and excellent. 5/5.

    ~rolo

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    wow this is really good i will 5/5 can u read my poem the 1 u commetned scepter of love i delted it was really bad lol i amde new one tis called angel#1 (you being I) please comment thx

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    nicely written.