Comments : One More Time

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    I have had my share of depression, but I never cut. I enjoyed this poem and gives a semi-understanding to self harm. Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Wow, great poem! I love it! 5/5!
    hugs!

  • 18 years ago

    by shakenangel

    Very touching. From the heart and filled with emotion, absolutely stunning!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Wow. Very descriptive and haunting to the core as you decide to do it "one more time." awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    very emotional poem. i hope you are able to find peace within yourself soon though.

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra

    Very good. Very deep. Well written. It was amazing. Great Job. 5/5! Keep it up.

    -Sandra-

  • 18 years ago

    by BROKen2PEIces

    I LOVE YOUR POEM!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    WOW...I'm kinda speechless...one of the best poems I have ever read...That was so intense, powerful and very deep, I just LOVE it!!!! AMAZING....I relate so much to this one and it grabbed me from the beginning to the end. Nice flow and rhyme...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    i always thought sad poems come with most feeling n can form lil pics in my mind i can just feel that pain ruch up my veins i like your poem

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    Wow, what an amazing poem! I'm speechless. It's full of so much emotion, I can't say I relate, but I know people that can. Keep up the awesome work! Your a very talented writer! xX

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Amazing! keep up the wonderful work

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Its a good poem and very sad david. Wish i could write poems like that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    That was good david. Hope to finish reading it soon.:)