wow, nice :) that left me kinda speechless but very cool. keep it up k

-faithfulserenity

ps.thank u for the coment

like christina said that left me speechless it was really good though......o ya and thxs for the comment

This was a good poem. I like the ryhming scheme a whole lot. Keep it up.

This is good. I like it.

awesome poem its really scary but really well written well done

i love it! excellent poem!

5.5

love and hugs

.... kinda worried but not... hope this wasnt me... gr8 poem either way

wow that was real good, thanx 4 ccomenting on mine

Really good poem! Nice rhymes and flow! Good job!
Keep it up *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Oooh, seems eerie as well as sad. I like the whole poem. But im not sure about the "or she has you" bit at the end. Maybe it just needs a line of its own. But still good poem. Thanks for your review by the way. X

lovely poem dear....u have some beautiful collection of poems here. keep writing !!!

Interesting poem, i really didn't get the whole start of the poem to be honest with you. I think that there was a lot of effort put forth i just can't seem to get the first part of the poem for the life of me...i re-read it a few times.

Very well done poem besides that, perhaps it is just late and i should be in bed.

I think i will head there now..

Good poem.

Thanks for your comment and vote on my poem. I really appreciate it, i am really glad that you haven taken an interest in my poem. Thanks.

I really like your poems...If you would please rate and comment on mine I would really appreciate it! Thank you!

Great poem! I like it a lot! Keep up the good work!

~Megan~

heyy, nice poem ;) keep it up ! !
thankz for the comment <333
kassandra . / *

whoa that's good!!! your a great writer!!
that kinda left me like....aaaahhh.. WHOA!!!
keep it up!i!i
!~Raye~!

i really liked this one, it was really good, it was kinda different from ur other poems tho. and its a little hard to follow the way that its written out. other than that it was really good, like most of your poems.
thanx for that
tessa

Ooo...i like this poem, its was meaningful with short lines with lots of emotions! great job, read some of mine when you have time!
weeping wolf

This is a really good poem..keep it up ..im going to read sum more of ur poems they r really good xoxo laura aka sweets

That kol i like it !!

did i tell u i added u to my favorites!?