I thought it was great Christina! You wrote this in a cool way. I really liked it.Wuv you! <3

~Krissy

Wow. Excellent poem. It wasnt weird at all...I loved the style. keep it up xxx

My computer won't let me vote, idk y, but i really like this poem. It's a little strange, but to me it makes a lot of sense. you got the title from the hiku, its the first thing I remembered when I read the title. Great poem, keep it up.

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<3 EiMaJ <3

very diffrent, very good .. oh by the way there is nothing boring about brown eyes :O) ..... 6.31 on the Ronin 6.66 scale...

great poem! 5 very different and unique style of writing! :)

i really liked how you put like 2 words between each of the rhymes nice work5/5 ``-``

Its not weird at all. I understood it. It was different but nice! I loved this poem.

ur poem is not weird...i actually like it!i could relate some how...im also broken into pieces... ^^,

ur poem is not weird...i actually like it!i could relate some how...im also broken into pieces... ^^,

damn! i love it. its not weird at all. 5/5 great job

love,
paulette

This was great! The format was also very unique & creative. 5/5

I actually liked this poem, and reminds me of one I wrote called love and hate, that I didn't post on this site yet. I'll let you know when I do.
~5/5
Emmy

Wow i realy liked it it was compleatly different!

5 all the way:D

Jacs
xxx

You have a lot of talent. Every one of your poems is amazing. I especially liked this one. Keep up the amazing work.
alyssa

Wonderful
really good poem
keep ur good work up hun
lov ya
Yours
Nema
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Its really a great poem buddy..... very well written and each word is true in itself..

I dont think its weird
i LOVE it
its awesome
reallllly good words

kat - xox

I love it!!

Hey. this was really good. i liked how eah line was shorter, the flow and rhyming was very good. so yeah- great job! 5/5 :)

Omg...i love this!!! great poem 5/5

xoxo becca