wow...strong poem. i agree with you but considering ur friends place in this situation i see her view as well. shes a young teen with a whole life ahead of her...and a baby would probably ruin the chances...of a ...normal life...but i understand wat ur trying to say as well

well i gave it a 5

please read some of mine as u said in the post

In this poem, you really do get the point across, especially in the baby's point of view. Abortion really is wrong, I just can't get the reason why a person would want to destroy a child's love. A tiny little baby doesn't deserve to be killed when they haven't even a chance to live. 5/5,
~Emmy

Thank you so much guys. xxx

Thank you!!!

thank you so much. xxx

This is a really good poem and I agree with your view completely. You are a very strong person to call your friend murderer and go against her when she believes in one thing and u in another. Keep writing and stay strong!
Megan

thats really good. i like how u made me see everyones point of veiw i agree with u. i to had to go through this with my bestfriend. she chose the knife unfortnalty. keep up it was really good.

Wow you've done a gr8 job, no doubt, especially on such a controversial subject! Very strong opinions and beliefs...5/5...I totally understand ALL sides of the arguement. No, I don't agree with abortion, but had it been my friend i would have supported her without any judgement. That's just me. I imagine having to make that decision must have been terrifying for your friend to make. I mean, think about it...Again, wonderful job! Peace, //ari\\

well, right and wrong is a POINT OF VIEW.
your right she messed up, but that doesn't mean that she has to spend the rest of her life paying for it. Everyone deserves a second chance. There is such a thing as Stem Cell research. If the fetus never developed into a baby, then technically there never was a baby, therefore she is killing no one. And although you may think it's simple, if it were to happen to you I'm sure that you'd be thinking something else. It's always easier to give someone else advice than to take it yourself.
and like i said, right and wrong is a point of view, not a fact.

abortion is murder i know i was going to be a father but my girl friend didnt want him. i have 9 other brothers and sisters, no parents my mom was going to abort me if she did then 9 lives would be ruined. I can see about the moms point of view but shes just as wrong as my mom and my mom walked out on us. so plz wat ever you do dont abort.

Thank you so much everyone...I knew everyone would have different points of views on this poem...and that is okay. xxx

Thanks Xtine

Abortion is not murder. It's a very hard thing to do and I think rather than call your friend a 'murderer' you should stand by her.

I know my situation. What she did was wrong in her case. Something else could have been done.

Thanks Jane.

Thank you hun, xxx

awwww thats so sad. im sorry and i know its wrong to kill. but maybe she was afraid she wouldnt live through the birth?

Nicely written! I have to agree with you! it's very wrong, keep up the great writing!! 5/5!

That is really cool, i love the three point of views, very very very good poem...
xox Bam 5/5

Aww...that is so sad. but it is very very good! I really like it, and I think that it is very accurate. I like the flow, too, and the rhyme scheme. You did a great job with this poem, props to ya!