Seasons changing, but im still here!

by Kane Burden   Jun 20, 2005


Shall i leave, or shall i stay?
been standing here far too long waiting for the courage to come along.
Left standing here, in the cold
looking straight at your door.
Wish we could just be one
but you have no idea where i come from.
my love for you is so extreme
but will it be for you supreme?
I have only met you once
and it was so long ago
but here i am
standing with a rose.
What to say, what to do
how shall i confront you?
Still standing here in front of your door
shall i knock, or shall i call?
This door is terrorizing me
not being able to see
if you are home or if you are gone.
should i stay, or should i return.
colors are dull and things are cold
summer has gone
and now its fall.
What used to be bright
now is dark
the petals of my rose
are falling off.
Seasons are changing
but I'm still here
waiting for you to someday appear.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Thats great. i really love your style. keep it up x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    This poem is so cute, at all it has some special prince-with-a-rose magic , lol, maybe some kind of my romantic impression. ;-) But I like such profound writing with this bit of fairy-tale .

    I hope to read more great poems like that from you .

    Lots of love
    Sabine

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    the petals of my rose
    are falling off.
    Thats so sweet for some reason it meant so much great work Kane and beautiful write keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    WOW for some reason, this one is my favorite! Awesome job... so much passion once again...

    All the best,
    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    AWW! That's soo adorable! How come there aren't any guys like you in America?