Comments : I have lost...

  • the poem had so much emtion it was like wow

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Thts reli deep well done x keep it up . plz comment and vote on some of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    that poem was so powerful, well done, i really loved the wording you did in the stanzas, keep it up and please always keep your head up, if this guy is cheating on you, he is the one that has the loss, he isnt worth your life sweety you always rememberthat ok!!!

    Luv Always
    *Lucy*

  • 18 years ago

    by Char

    I can't believe people say "Great poem, so sorry... HEY can you come and comment about my poems?!"... some people just aren't very understanding and caring are they? Well I'm here for ya... I care about you more than you will ever know... Excellent poem (not like you ever write bad ones) Just remember, don't quit on me...

  • 18 years ago

    by sad-taurus

    Great poem! very deep.. i feel for you, sometimes i feel that way too, hang in there. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    wow, that was really long. Great write though. Awesome job. <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    This is very sad and great. I love it. Can relate. Keep up the good work!

    Rachel Morgan

  • 18 years ago

    by cizu - joey chan

    honestly, i like the poem with rhyme but for this one is exceptional.. its really full of feeling, i even feel like im inside the story.. well done ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkxBlood

    hey good poem girl! keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine!!
    ~lindsey

  • You Repeated Your Point Alot In This Poem, I Like That, For The Simple Fact That Many People Write Poems, And Can't Stick To The Topic,(But You Did a Awesome Job Of Sticking To Your Message) 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    i like your poem... i especially lykd the convo with u n andy.. its reli touching.. keep working!!
    nouna