Stormy Weather

by Green Maiden   Jun 21, 2005


The darkest night that I have
Ever seen, the rain that lashes on the
Marble of this cold and lifeless
Picture of a love that might have been.
Eyes of ice, a heart of
Stone, your picture in my mind-
Truth lies, as ever, it is merely heartless reason redefined.

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There's something about this poem that you don't see at first glance. It's the first time I've used this structure without making it sound trite!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    what? why did it comment twice? i didnt click the button twice. wierd computer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    oooh. had to read that one twice. good enjambement, good imgary, good vocabulary, good poem. good poem indeed

  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    oooh. had to read that one twice. good enjambement, good imgary, good vocabulary, good poem. good poem indeed