you had me there for a minute....very creative! 5/5 Peace! //ari\\

glad it is fictional. my friend's father made her life a living hell. this poem was really nice...very emotional .xxx

Maybe not true but the way so many kids feel. I've felt this way since I was 6. I hated his guts for leaving but missed him with all my heart. I think of him everyday and miss him still. Funny how one can never experience such a thing but can write it better than one who did... :) Another excellent write. Boy I'll tell you you got some talent...I'll be watching for you...lol Nicely done!! 5/5 :)

great job!! keep it up i love it