wow...this is amazing! wonderfully described and written. i love this line:

"The razor kisses her white skin"

you are greatly talented...i will be reading more.

5.5

love and hugs

Awesome work, hope that helps some ppl
take care bo,
-Allen

Thank you everyone!

"Why couldn’t you hear her pain?
But everyone can see her scars"

I really liked these two lines, but I think (just my opinion) it might sound better if you said, "No one could hear (/see) her pain But everyone can see her scars."

Other than that, this poem was beautiful. Again, you have supreme talent for portraying the mood and atmosphere. Amazingly touching poem.

Thank you everyone. Robyn I will do that. xxx

thanks xxx