by LAST RONIN
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Sound like a early spring day in Scotland. good work..6.29 |
by Brookeღ
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Beautiful! I love looking at the clouds! I skydive so there is no feeling like falling through the clouds! Once again good job painting the picture! ~Brooke~ |
by Soraya Lowe
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This poem is very well written. It describes the sky exaclty like I see it :) Keep up the good work! |
by Marjan
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so beautiful. I loved this one. |
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Good poem! 5 |
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wow...you made me enjoy another poem about nature. lovely. |
by aaron c s
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i really got into it but the 6th line felt forced. if i were u i would change it to make it flow. but im not u and this is not my poem so good job. |
by Andrea
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i really like this poem, you write alot that dont rhyme but its good. |
by kiesha
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I love reading nature poems. It reminds me that there is still beauty out there, untouched by the smog of society. Good job. I liked this one. |