Comments : Visions Of A Sky

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    Sound like a early spring day in Scotland. good work..6.29

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Beautiful! I love looking at the clouds! I skydive so there is no feeling like falling through the clouds! Once again good job painting the picture! ~Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Soraya Lowe

    This poem is very well written. It describes the sky exaclty like I see it :) Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    so beautiful. I loved this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Good poem! 5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    wow...you made me enjoy another poem about nature. lovely.

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    i really got into it but the 6th line felt forced. if i were u i would change it to make it flow. but im not u and this is not my poem so good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    i really like this poem, you write alot that dont rhyme but its good.

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    I love reading nature poems. It reminds me that there is still beauty out there, untouched by the smog of society. Good job. I liked this one.