by Hot_Trav_lover Jun 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Running down my face |
by x-Beth-x
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- Your good at writing but all of your poems are forced. The rhyming is forced. Your trying to hard just let it flow. Keep writing !!! ♥ - |
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the last line confuses me, its as if it comes out of no where... |