i love it.....victoria....it was good...touching....i gave u a 5/5!
check out some other poems of mine.

I can feel your pain. But u are young. It will get better. You will find the love of your life and hopefully will have a happy life!

It wont always be this way, you are too gifted.

Trust in tomorrow.

Your poem is just lol .. it explains the truth about love and i like it !! Gr8 Work !

amazing poem! i love the emotions that are so real and you have written this just wonderfully and i love it!!

5.5

love and hugs

This is so so sad, good write.

Steve

Hey, thanks a heap for comenting on my poem, it means a lot. This may not be your best, but it is still very good! Keep up the great work, have fun.
Bye Bye
Ben

hey nice job keep it up 5/5

T0uchinG lines. very wel| written!!
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
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