Comments : A Short Poem About Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    short, sweet, and to the point! great job! loved it!
    peace,
    Abcede

    ~maybe you could check out some of my stuff!?~

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Short with a lot of emotion. I have been in the same situation! Well written! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I like your short ones. I think it's quick and easy to read when i havent got much time. hehe. ok so i think this is pretty great and i give it a 5. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I like your short ones. I think it's quick and easy to read when i havent got much time. hehe. ok so i think this is pretty great and i give it a 5. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    it had a good rhyme.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I like it despite the shortness. Right to the point. Well said.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    omg great work!! Mwaz stephy :):)