Why I love you

by Alicia   Jun 23, 2005


So many laughs,
to many tears.
Im so glad you have been here,
throughout the years.

You know me better
than i know myself.
You are so caring,
and you always wanna help.

Your kiss makes me smile,
your smile makes me laugh.
I want to have your child,
can you imagine that?

I love you so much,
it hurts me inside.
You make me so happy,
you are my life.

Its easy to see
why I love you so.
But what i dont understand,
is why you had to go..

.::Please rate and write comments, I would really appreciate it. Thanks::.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    make sure each line has the same beat. and im not talking about syllables or anything just read it thru and just make sure that the beat stays the same thru the whole thing. thats all. its hard to do.

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    hey thats a really good poem. one thing i want to say is make sure it all flows together ya kno? otherwise great job.

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