youre a really really good writer! Congrats.

Oh my gosh, that was a really amazing poem, it like captured my soul :P lol, good job!!!!!

----Natalie*----

omg awsum poem mate. it was soo sweet and just plain good:)

Stay strong always...you can get through anything. The poem is lovely, nice work!

xxx

Good poem thanks for commenting on mine. This is really good keep it up! *MUAH*
Sam

omg..i jus been thru the exact same thing..u like him so much..but them u realise u jus wanna b friends..i like wrote a poem bout how much i liked him..than the day after..it all ended..he was like..i jus wanna b friends..nd i fell apart..cos i hadnt liked someone that much for so long..i feel ur pain darl..u can do it..i have.lol..nite. ~ anasha .xoxo

oh! bitter-sweet!! but great flow and great topic!! awesome job! you write kinda like me.. COOL! lol! 5/5 MOST DEFINATELY!
love always,
Abcede

Great poem! 5/5! Thanks for commenting on mine! ps- I like your name LOL!

Wow! That's a nice poem! Like this poem a lot! Great job Amanda!! Please check out my poems too.

My kind of poem. Know the feelings. Good job, interestingly expressed. X

You are great! this poem is really good and you are a good writer... you commented my poem a while back sorry it took so long for me to comment you back but i jus wanted to let you know you have great talent!

This poem is absolutely fantastic. I think you did a wonderful job and this poem is definitely 5/5

Such an amazing poem =)
you are really good!
only one thing i could find was you put "riping me apart" i guess you mean ripping?

still such an amazing deep poem
keep up the work it will get you through hard times that you will be coming to =)

Much love
Jacs
xxxxx

I really like this one.