This poem is really really good, i like it a lot!! It is also very sad but good. Great Job!! If you can will you comment and vote on my poems thx! And keep it up awesome job!

this is a great poem but very sad keep up the good work and if you need ot tlak im here lyl

☼Becky☼

This is an excellent poem. I think i speak for many when i say that we have been there too. Keep up the good work.

this was really good! the ending just sums it all up. I hope it isnt true.
<3333 Samz

excellent poem. 5/5!
Jenn.

Oh wow.. is this a true story. I hope not but it is a very good poem. Keep up the good work.,...

This was heartbreaking! I could feel the fear in this child. Sadly stuff like this happens everyday. Keep on writing!

wow that story is so familiar.. something like that happened in my home town this time last year.. except it was a boy, his sister, and his mom the night his dad came home and was drunk.. that poem was really good though.. i really liked it.. bye bye EJ

OMG. That is the FIRST poem that made me drop my jaw, so congratulations. This poem was a 5+ cos it was so awesome. Check out my poems sometime when you aren't so busy. It won't drop your jaw though. lolol.
Asian Luv Alwayz

speechless...absolutley incredible.
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

no, it's not true, and it's never happened to anyone i know either, i just was like sleep deprived one night, and wrote it at like 5am lol

hey that is really good... is it true?

you are an amazing amazing writer, not only in this poem but in all the others that I have read. Your poems are filled with such emotion and flow soo well. Keep writing, your amazing!!!

This poem is really really good, i like it a lot!! It is also very sad but good. Great Job!! If you can will you comment and vote on my poems thx! And keep it up awesome job!

Wow this is real sad too:[ but i love it because you did a really good job writing it. i have a poem similar to this about a girls dad beating her except mines titled "Daddy,why?" you should read it. i think you'll like it!

Understand that I am here for ya kid...
I'll be there our group is pretty well off you have a home with us...
Had I have seen him...
anyway

This one was one of the best i've read. definite 5/5
but i hope it isn't true...