Good poem its really deep you have written it well!

take care

Damn good poem.. I could almost see the story as if I where there..

it's really good...i really liked the last stanza

wow that was really REALLY good! i seriously loved it! scary! well done!

great poem.

wow i really like this, its good, is it true ? I hope not..........
<3 Charli xxx ~*~

oh wow....that was amazing....i got the chills....it was just very sad....keep up the awesome work *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))
-your fellow hippie/tree hugger wannabe lol-

ha ha that's right poetess!!

GO HIPPIE/TREE HUGGER PEOPLE!

Wow. That was sad. Was it a true story? Nice write. I enjoyed it:)

My poem i wrote is kinda true, my friends locked up in kearney, a juevinal jail, and he wants to go awol, (away with out leave) last time he tried to kill himself on pills, and I went all the way to his house, and called the police and stuff, and so yeah, but hes locked up and wants to kill himself but he hasnt tried anything yet
nice poem, excellent

I like it alot! By the way, thanx for commenting on mine :P

Very nice poem. I really liked it. 5/5 great job.
Thanx 4 comenting on my poem it means a lot and yea I really do that. I no its sad nd sick but I still do it . But anyway I wudnt really kill myself.
Take care