Comments : I am a Jelly Doughnut (Acrostic Poem)

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I liked this! A lot! Very original, creative... Living in France, eh? Do you like it there, or is America better? Great job, 5/5
    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    lol, so cute and it was funny too!! great poem.. and those are so difficult to flow, but you did it very well!! 5/5!
    love,
    abcede ^,^

    (maybe you could check out some of my poems)

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    As always amazing Zoe you are so talented and I hope one day you will make it very big. 5/5 as always

  • 18 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    made me smile.. i havent really smiled since i left paris. thanks. keep writing. i wish i could

  • 18 years ago

    by Elise

    hehe that's a cool poem !!! now i wanna eat...ok, gone to the kitchen !!! love you !!!
    E.

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice One! Now you've made me hungry.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Thanks alot i want donouts now but i rellylikedthis poem funny and creative
    take care
    HS

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Lol wow this was a very good poem.. very very unique but I loved it. and to be honest I love the jelly filled ones. Beautiful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by abcede

    Omg, i love how you encased this poem in such an awesome metaphor 5/5, babe - totally ROCKS!