That Girl

by Rachel   Jun 24, 2005


She's tired of herself,
She's tired of her life.
All the expectations,
Cause her to use the knife.

She just wants
To please them all,
but failed indignantly
and started to fall.

Crying and lying
That's all she did.
Her tears and slits
Were things she hid.

All she wanted
Was someone to care.
To fix her again
Someone who was there.

That girl was trapped
And wanted to be free
I'm sorry to say
That that girl was me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by brokenwings88

    omg i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by elizabeth

    I really like how you described the girl, and then at the end tell the reader it is you. I like this because sometimes I feel like I've changed so much that I'm just watching myself, as this girl I dont even know. great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    very good...i have a lot of poems about things liek that...
    "Cutting"
    and "Making Everyone Happy"
    i'm sorry u cut if this poem is true
    Remeber the world will love you for you!
    Hey that ryhmed
    lol
    taylor

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