Hoping

by Neil   Jun 25, 2005


After wanderin the dark alleys
Passing trails from mountains to valleys

I arrive and wait
For the girl, sent to me by fate

As I lie awake
Hoping that this was no mistake

I kneel and pray
Hoping that this is not what they say

A fraud….. A fake
Or something made up like a cake

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work, I really liked the whole idea of the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    That is so deep, and i hope that the girl comes to you, you deserve it hey

  • 18 years ago

    by edsel

    Cool

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Great poem. Very deep, which i really like. I hope the girl comes to you soon.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    wow this is a cool poem! me likes! well done!

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