Self-Harm

I liked the tunnel of light analogy.
It was a good strong piece but I just felt it was a litttle brief and there is scope for another stanza or two. Perhaps you could give a little more depth to feelings?
Try reading 'Friend'

amy me and u really have the same feelings its weird cuz thats how i feel

Great poem 5* please read some of mine. Much Luv, cutE without the E