Another great poem! It also flowed nicely and it is different than other poems that i read! 5

Another great poem!! 5 stars for this one too =D hugs

You are a great writer. Your work is so real. This was an excellent poem. Very powerful and true for a lot of people. The flow was great, and the rhyme scheme fit perfectly. Very nice! I really liked it. 5/5 for sure.

~rolo

this is a beautiful poem, 5/5

"We try to forget all the bad times
and all the things we've done wrong
we have to remember
that yesterdays gone"

I wish people would see that ^!! I have known somany people who have lived and are living bad lives and who blame theirselves constantly..Only if they could realize every one has pasts and tommorows in front of us! Nicely said Ashley! It really does make me proud to know that there are people who have hope!! Wonderful Job!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

I love the ending.

To comment on your profile real quick like...:) Anyone who says you're a bad poet is a bad reader, and just plain jealous. :)

you are right... these days, sometimes hope is all we have, and we must hold onto it! take care, and never stop writing!
Tom

This was amazing i dont know what else to say!!! i loved it xxxx

This is probably one of the best poems i've ever read. congrats. 5/5

Amazing ! im touched...
made a lot of sense
im adding u to my favourites...
love
amy

Amazing job, thanks for the inspiration