Sorry

by JIll   Jun 26, 2005


(i am a really bad writer but if someone could comment and vote so i can see what i have to work on ...it would mean sooo much to me)
As I sit here with tears streaming down my face,
I take these pills hoping that i can leave this place,
hoping i can leave this place of sorrow,fear, and hate,
knowing that the pills i took will quickly make my fate,
so as i sit here and wait for the pills to take effect,
i write a letter to all the ppl who's lives i have wrecked,
so i will sit here and wait to die
in these letters was my final goodbye

it doesn't really have a beginning like my other poems but i hope that you like it

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  • 18 years ago

    by L0KA

    Personally, I think that was a short but great poem. I liked the way it rhymed and the way you wrote it and you can tell you put a lot of emotion when you wrote it. I don't think you are a bad writer at all, I think you are very talented. Keep on writing and keep your head up. Great job. Peace. 5/5

    P.S. You should space this poem and try to make it a little longer. Also, instead of saying "i write a letter to all the ppl who's lives i had wrecked" fix it to- "I write a letter to all the people whose lives I have wrecked. " Just a suggestion. Anyway, great job.

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