this is a wonderful poem!...wheni read it i thought of seris 'Daughters of the moon'....have ya ever read those books?....they're really good!...luved ya poem! keep it up!xoxo

very nice, i might have to steal some of those words...b/c thats an amazing talent you have for ryhming

hey girl this is one of my favorites by you! i know you've been having a blah day so i figured you need some self esteem! lol. loved the vocabulary you used awesome poem 5/5
love, Chelsey

Very deep and full of emotion.. Wonderful write as always.. Keep writing and take care.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

that was very pretty and very discriptive. i loved it and encourage u to keep writing because i get new inspiration every time... i look foward to ur poems.

-faithfulserenity

hey girl you know i love this poem and i do too! ha ha those muffin people are tricky too... but enough about that i was to lazy to write an e-mail and that sux about your fun but thank you for your comments on my junky poems lol well i just thought this would be something nice for you to see. ha ha had you all excited didn't i? oh well i'll ttyl you better tell me when your joshua gets home! Love you all(you, josh, aliesha, kio, asia, and etc!!),
~Chelsey

oh and i meant to put phone...not fun...lol my bad... well ya try to call sometime... love chelsey