Real Me

by Crimson Juliet   Jun 28, 2005


I try to write
whats in my heart
but once I get started
I just can't stop
I feel so much
that no one knows
I hide it well
so nothing shows
until one day
I want to see
if anyone notices
whats wrong with me

whats the point of crying
if no one even cares
tears rolling down my cheeks
and everyone just stares
I'm the one whose always happy
the one whose always there
the one everyone counts on
to let them know I care

but if I were to stop
what would you do
you say my smile
is what gets you through
I can't always smile
I need someone who cares
someone I know
will always be there
thats all I am
to those who need me
someone to listen
and then to set free..

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  • 18 years ago

    by xXlostXx

    hey, good job, thats a awsum poem. keep it up
    5/5
    - xXlostXx

  • 18 years ago

    by nina hart

    gosh!! u really write well. i just loved it...IT makes me think of me too...ur talent lies in your simplicity n thatz truly gr8, wish could write like you too. Anyway keep up your effort
    take care
    nina

  • 18 years ago

    by L0KA

    Wow! I loved this poem. I can really relate to this one. This explains me! You are a great poet and you seem like a great friend. I loved the way you wrote it and how it rhymed. You have talent! I hope you find that friend who will set you free. Thank you so much for writing this. Keep your head up and keep up the excellent work. I hope to see some of your future work. Peace. Good luck. 5/5

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