You Lied To Me

by Lecrissa   Jun 28, 2005


This poem caries on I don't quit like it the way it is. So help out and give me suggestions.

You lied to me!!!
You said you loved me
You said you cared
You said you would always
Be there to hold my hand

Now you are gone
And I'm all alone
I'm fighting the loneliness
Left behind with the pain
I'm so afraid of starting
All over again

Time has passed since you
Went your own way
I'm no longer struggling
To fight the pain
You have moved on
Then moved once again
I am happy just to spend
More time with my friends

They tell me you hit the
Bars almost every night
Most times you end up
In a bar fight

To tell you the truth
I'm glad that you are gone
Now I put my right foot forward
And listen to a new song

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the last stanza. It was a beautiful way to end a great poem. The emotions were real and I could tell it came straight from your heart. Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I can relate this poem and i remember someone hehe,, well its great to read this kind of poets enjoyable. by the way thanks for the compliment of mine god bless

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    aww, i have a slight understanding of this poem. but noy from my own experience. apart from the lying part
    but anyway, very good poem hun
    take care
    xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Very good. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Thanks hon

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