aw, thats sweet, sad, but so good.

this is awesome- my brother just graduated...

OMFG u ROCk at writing poems ...

Wow, alot of the poems I have been reading have put a lot in perspective for me. This is definetly one!
Thanks 5/5

i can realt to the guy who took his life. b/c im the one of the kids who always got picked on. but i have NEVER wanted to take my own life. ne way 5/5 keep up the good wrk

Hey that was realy good i lobe how u write poems

WOW this is really gud!!! keep up the gud work bub... laterz!

that's um... that's really good!!!
SHAWNDA

OMG this is the best poem ever!!!..ur a flippin poet prodoje <-----dont know how to spell that ...haha well keep it up ...
later
liz

This is soo sad,....at my school we have had quite a few classmates do that. I hope this isn't real, and if it is.......I am sorry. So many people are picked on, but not everyone can see the hatred and lonliness behind their eyes. Very good, 5/5!!

omffg awsome poem
i loved it
~HazE

Wow. i love the way you rite, its totally transfixing... ill have to read the rest of your poems hey.. and then maybe you could return the favour? yeh anyways, 5/5. good work, love emles

This is really good. I can say i did that too made fun of some kids just to fit in and three of them killed themselves our 12th grade year and I have felt a lot of guilt. I really like your poems.

Oh my gosh. i'm near tears. that was so sad. the beginning was so happy and everything and then the ending just make me tear up! good job! 5/5!

WOW, you really have talent!

This is sad..

WOW!! I LOVEDIT. i HAD A CLASSMATE WHO TOOK HER LIFE ALSO, CUZ OF BULLYS SO i CAN REALTE TO IT. yOU'RE REALLY GOOD, KEEP WRITING!! 5/5

Wow! This was heartbreaking. Again had no idea where this would end. I love how the end ties in with everything else. Powerful read. Keep up the great job!

Wow! This is reallt deep. something that needs to be taught from the time children first start school The effects that arise from torment are very ugly. Great write Becca. You did a really good job on this.

It's a good try, there could be some changes somewhere, but its really good, i liked how you started off, but the flow got lost somewhere though, but good try.