"Only to fall in defeat and congratulated by tears"
^ the personification adds more depth to your poem.. the ending also really makes impact on the poem. I <33 you and hopefully i will see you sometime this summer.
[[samz]]

I know so many who find themselves in this position - the usual low and the day after.

I like it; its serene innosence and truth in it grip the audience with empathy and reminders. I don't know a soul who hasn't found themself so low that they disgust the coming day.

Fake smiles, make up, lies, and whimming for a cover story ... yea, it can suck.

Very well illustrated; especially for those of us who just can't articulate these days. Hats off to you. Take Good Care.

5/5

excellent!!! amazing!!! your writing is wonderful in capturing the sadness and emotion. i love it!

5.5

love & hugs