Looking Back

by Mike   Jun 30, 2005


As I sit here,
I'm watching you.
Just thinking of,
What I should do.
You look at me,
And I look at you.

And in your eyes,
I can see,
That you've been watching,
right back at me.

I tell myself,
"Go and talk".
But I must make,
That nervous walk.

All the way,
To your seat.
I must go,
So we can meet.

So as I think,
Of what to say.
You stop looking,
And turn away.

I think to myself,
How can this be.
She was looking,
Straight back at me.

So with one last thought,
And one last breath.
I take that walk,
That feels like death.

As I walk,
I start to prey.
Only because,
I forgot what to say.

So as I remember,
This day in my head.
I still don't know,
Just quite what I said.

But I know now,
It was a good thing.
Because starting now,
Your wearing my ring.
As the church bells,
Start to ding.

(My first poem, feel free to give ideas)

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  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    TERRIFIC!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffanie

    I really like your poems i think they are really good. Keep up the good work.
    *Tiff*

  • 18 years ago

    by Brianne

    YOUR FIRST POEM???? WOW, MY FIRST POEM WASNT EVEN HALF AS GOOD AS THAT. GREAT WORK!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mike

    Thank you very much, I don't know about a book lol. I just want to improve more and more. Thanks for encouragement I really appreciate it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mike

    Actually, it may come to surprise, but im very much single at the moment, these poems dont come from any single person. They come from what I want in a woman, and just everything I've learned in life so far.