Perfect - I didn't notice anything wrong with it... it's the best love poem I've seen on this site...

Awesome
-Lyd

Brilliant poem, really full of emotion and feeling which always adds to the brilliance and excitement whilst reading, well done to you, this was well written

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loved it
keep your good work
Nema
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good,,,

WOW. that was mind blowing. That was so good I had to google it to make sure it wasn't plagiarized. Great job. That is my example of real talent.

But I'm curious, are gay/bi? because this poem seems to be written from the pov of a man. just wondering. or maybe you just put yourself in his shoes. either way, it's great.

Take care,
Renee

Good work. Keep writing. X

Greatly written! once again i enjoyed it!! 5/5, keep up the great work!

thats really good. once again youv written something amazing. keep it up!

Very good, I love your poems!

I think you did a nice job putting concrete objects into it, and I liked the shampoo part, but that's just me. Wonderful job, writing from a different point of view. :)

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I didn't know what I had
Until I’ve lost you
I didn't know what I had
But I liked your shampoo
^Its a good poem, but the shampoo part may need some editing

Amazing job "I didn't know what I had
Until I’ve lost you" that so true and happend to many of us keep it up 5.5 and thanks for your comment

Good one! Good flow! Great job!!