Everything just gets worse

by aaron c s   Jun 30, 2005


Everything just gets worse
Slipping
Falling
Crashing
Dying
Everything just gets worse
Loving
Lying
Losing
Leaving
Why is her touch so coarse
I lose
Forever in regret
To have slipped
And to have fallen
To crash into the defeat
And the heart is dying
Everything starts off
There's loving
Then lying
Then you lose the lying love
You dont leave but she does
You want to feel the touch
The hands are coarse
Everything just gets worse

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  • 20 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a lovely poem
    5/5
    its different & intense
    i liked readin it
    love
    amy

  • 20 years ago

    by lee

    I believe everything gets worse for some reason...or they do acutally get worse, but just for a while.acutally it gets worse more than it gets good. but idk, tha's just my thoughts not that. but good poem. i lk it cuz it was true 5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by JLT

    Great poem. Things do get worst... Most of the time. Well they do for me lol. Well written, it's amazing. *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 20 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Aaron, you surely know how to put feelings into poems!!! The sun will shine eventually!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Victoria

    wow thats really good..i cant get over how good of a writer you are lol...or you lol..

    much love to ya

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