wow lovely job i feel it alot b/c this is how i feel about my ex keep it up 5/5

Thank you guys. xxx

I think is is a very beautiful poem , saying what you would do just to see him smile . Makes me think of my bf right now ..*smiles*.. I love it .....

thanks April. xxx

Perfect rhyme, a very good poem!

omg that is so sweet great dedication....5/5

That was one of the best love poems ive heard on here, i totally understand what you're saying.... that was awesome...so good
*keep smiling*
Katy

"Hours feel like seconds
And years feel like a day
For when I am with you
The time just flies away"

My favorite stanza. That really is what love does. After almost 6 years in a relationship I look back and wonder where the hell all that time went. lol This is just a beautiful poem. It seems as though it all just suddenly came to you, that it was the easist thing to write. That's the best kind of write :) the one you don't stuggle with, or at least the ones that just read that way. I love that. Excellent write! Take Care

You are amazing I read the poem with tears streaming down my face. You have a poetic soul and I can tell you know what it is like to love someone with all of your heart. :)

thank you all. xxx

I really liked this peoms cadence...it flowed so nicely. And so heartfelt! Amazing! Maybe you could check out my stuff and tell me what you think? Well done! 5/5

Aww!I loved this poem and it is so sweet! You are a great poem writter and I am fixen to check and see if u have any other poems cause if they are as good as this one I can't wait to read um!You need to turn this one in it should be able to get published as good as it is!But good luck in the future! Much love sent! *HeatheR*

awwwwwwwwwwwww its so so sweet!!! i love tht poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ur a gd at writin poems!!! :D keep it up

awww that was awesome!! keep on writing!

This is good poem! Nice job it kinda brought a tear to my eye. *5*. Keep it up! LoTz

Thank you everyone. xxx =]

I really like this poem! I don't know if you meant to or not but the clump of verses you put together in the middle really kept the poem together! I loved it! G2G read your other poems!

that was way cute good job Love Rylee

good

this poem remindz meeh of my boyfriend!!! that meanz its good!