I wrote this to my girlfriend. I'm defiantly gonna work on it some more before i give it to her on Saturday but please tell me what you think and let me know how i could make it better.
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As I sit and write to you
the years flash through my head.
Starting from our first day as friends,
Till when we first held hands.
In reality it hasn't been all to very long.
We have barely had the time,
to sit and watch the stars at night
in their beauty so sublime.
Believe me when I say it.
Babe I love you so.
I only want to hold you close,
And never let you go.
You are my one and only
My Angel you've become.
You have given my heart the strength
to Fly straight to the sun.
I will never give up,
My love for you goes on.
Forever will my heart be strong,
Through space, time, and beyond.
I love you mor than anything,
This you must believe.
When did you start doubting
And being so Naive?
How could I ever be untrue,
or unfaithfult to you girl?
I'd be stupid to ruin something so great
Because you've become my world.
I might not get to see you,
Every second of every day.
But we will always be together,
Because our love will find a way.
