Oh yeah...and this is a true masterpiece.

Thanks for commenting on mine but i totally disagree with you... i dont like structure...always hated it and thats why i love the poems i do there like me...free and not rhyming....
urs are good for the type you do...
very deep...
later*

Wow, I think I get to change my name to Angel now, to the person who gets ruined by another, and who tries to end the distorted fairy tale, except I wasn't as successful as Angel because somehow I'm still here. I really loved this poem!

Mikochan

Great poem! I liked a lot. It's very true.

-Taylor

Ur so talented and ur poem is fantastic keep up da great work!! Mwaz Stephy :)

Wow, this is very good. I especially like the last stanza, don't know why. lol

That was outstanding!very sad...yet hopeful right up until the "Angel" committed suicide.great job.

Great poem, it is one of my favourites that i have seen on here and it all flows so well. There was only one thing i did not like too much about it and that was the last four lines. I'm not sure why i just think that it would be better if it ended with the second to last paragraph. Other than that i think it is perfect.

Wow that was really good. You did not need to clarify it was rape that had been performed, but its cool u did. Excellent

I really like this poem! Great rhymes and rhythm. I love the last two stanzas. The angel leaves the fairytale yet it does move on to the last stanza. It's great how it seems to suggest that life went on after she died. The villain lives while she's long gone and it's very eye-opening. Amazing! I love your work so much!

You really have a way with words and a real craft in telling a story in great rhyme. Back in 2005 I am just struggling to write a poem...but you had it in you already. A great talent indeed.