I loved it. Great message you're sending. Life truly is a gift. Wonderful write...great flow and powerful words. I'm sure someone will listen..who could deny such beautiful words? Not me, excellent. 5/5.

~rolo

i like this poem, good job 5/5

nice job! good flow, keep it up...never stop writing!

aw this is so beautiful yet sad also....very good and insightful...5/5

Hey. This is really good. I like it. Good Job. Will you rate my poems thanks...

Sweet poem. Like the way it ends the way that it started. Rhymes fairly well also.

"Always say “yes” when asked to dance
That’s what I would say given the chance."

My favorite lines....people are afraid as others may be watching. I like that! Good message. It doesn't seem like JUST dancing either. It could be anything....just let yourself go and have some fun. Nice message! People WILL listen my dear....speak up!!

Another nice write...... :)

Well I would lission. You write beautiful poems.