Two People With One Heart

by LOST iN LOVE   Jul 1, 2005


If you feel the way you say you do,
Prove to me you'll always be true
If you do that I will give you my whole heart
And love you for the rest of my life
We can grow old together and I can be your wife
It will be so right
I know it seems impossible to have a relationship that long,
But I know we can't possibly go wrong
We can make this work
And never spend a moment apart,
And be two people with one heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    this is a really good poem. i write all the time and i havent yet been able to write my emotions/feelings out like that. you just described exactly how im feeling recently. if you dont mind can i copy this down and put it up on my web site ill even give you full credit on it i swear. ill even give you the website addy so you can check when i get it up there... by the way if you can will you please read and comment on my poems please at least some of them!! Thanx, keep writing your good.!
    Luv,
    *Ashley*,Jason*,Jasley*

  • 18 years ago

    by Leigh

    I LOVE THIS POEM!! This totally makes me think of how i am now with my boyfriend!! and you did so well on writing it!! Keep it up, you are such a good writer!!

  • 18 years ago

    by tigga47 aka Crissie

    aw this poem is so cute .. 5/5 crissie

  • 18 years ago

    by writer girl

    that was a cute poem. 5/5

    -kk-

  • 18 years ago

    by Jubes

    So much determindation and passion in this poem!! Its beautiful :0) You need to work on love and you can see that and show it in your poem!!
    Great write xo

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