Comments : My Insanity

  • 18 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Your a really good writer! Another good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    awsome work =D 5/5..! If you got time it would mean a lot if you checked out my poem "My dad:dead and gone forever" thanks a lot.. hugs

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    good poem, deep and meaningful.
    well done again.

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    wow that was very goo.d In the eyes of a criminal. Great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    captivating imagery expressing insanity great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    you portrayed this insane person so well, amazing! i love it. very imaginative.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    "They would even look past my heart,
    If it weren't a black hole."

    Lovely. This whole poem was lovely. and it really sounded like you knew what you were talking about. are YOU insane? haha just playing. and if you are, I still love you!

    Take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    I liked it. Keep writing.

    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This poem was sad, but I l0ved it

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    great beginning...the first line really sucked me in.

    It's important to be able to draw your readers in like that.

    Great piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    i really liked this poem
    it was discriptive and had meaning
    great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    wow..... 5/5 keep writing... good job.
    <3

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Very expressive... i guess i can kind of relate since im starting to lose my mind? -.-;;
    but... anyways, i loved it :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow-- This was amazing! Loved all the imagry in this piece! It was a really intense write that kept me sitting at the end of my chair. Tehe. I loved it. Great job! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    A poems that didnt rhyme yeah i dont like that kind of poem but then a great poem can be an exemption like this one even though it dosnt rhyme the flow and idea was great the form are really cool i like the ending of it great 5/5

    Geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I did actually really like reading this poem i like poems that are not the same as everyone elses it was different and gave me a whole new world :) i felt like i was the character in your poem :):) i realy did like it :):)