Drowned

by fallentears   Jul 3, 2005


There I lay
Plunged in darkness
Drowned with the water
My spirit half-floating
My body half-drowned
I see nothing
I feel nothing
There I fall
Going deeper
Deeper
I should be panicking
But I'm not
I'm on the way to death
Suddenly I come up to the surface
To reality

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    well, this was okay, but it was really short, and didn't really say anything...do you think you could make it longer, and maybe give us a little more detail about maybe the things you saw around you? but you're the writer, it's your descision

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