On The Wings of Paradise

by Renee   Jul 3, 2005


Standing alone
on the wings of paradise
music surrounds me
not an evil soul in sight

I feel at peace with myself
but it won't last long
because being alone
comes with a hefty bond

I remember that empty feeling
but I'm pushing it away
I want to enjoy this flight
on the wings of paradise

as a slight breeze whisks across my face
softer than my lovers embrace
I hold onto this feeling
a feeling of warmth and familiarity

I don't wish for this to go away
but It's too good to last
these wings of paradise
found in my secret stash

and as the last of the ashes
fall to my bedroom floor
the music fades
and these wings are no more.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Well....I do like it but I'm not sure I get it. Are smoking reefer? Seriously...I don't get it. It's in the nature department....so are you just enjoying nature right now or are you getting high on natural herbs? (Secret stash?) Hmmmm? LMAO...I'm seriously confused. Let me know and I'll write more....

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    good job! you are very talented! thanx for sharing!
    luv ya,
    Ashli

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Beautifully written poem! You have such a creative mind! That makes your poems unique your ideas are great! Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work when I have more time! ~Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by lorna westwick

    u got talent keep it up this is a really cool poem good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    i love poems that make me think, and this is definently one of them.

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