a very, very refreshing poem. great job.

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Well I think I should be insolted by GREEN DAY ROCKS for the coment.

Any one ealce agree?

no, i do not agree, i thought this was a nice poem, very calming. I'm glad someone can still write about the simple things in life that matter. Take care, and thank you for the comment.

Thanks hon

I love kids and I love playing on the play ground with them. I am part of the big brother big sister program and I get my little sister and take her to the play ground often. It's more fun than being at a club or hanging with my friends. It's a bit more special than that. I can picture you running around with her. I try to keep up and I'm only 20...they're too fast for me. I like the picture you painted with this. I'm sure everyone reading can see you playing with your little girl....truly special she is! Nice write!

pretty good, nice detail, short n sweet

i Agree with you...i htought the poems was very nice...5/5...thanks for commenting on mine

This is interesting, but a good kind. It's nice to read something happy for once.

Hello,
Good poem and I think you are pretty amazing poetry with a lot to offer.Jeff

Such a nice topic! Being at the park with a child can really wear you out! I remember the days when I used to take my son to the park. He would run from one thing another as fast as his little legs would take him. Good poem! ~Brooke~

Aww how lovely, playgrounds are the best place for kids, my little girl loves em. its a really nice poem.

You are a GODD poet. Keep it up!

Aw this is cute. I love watching my neice play at the playground, Little kids are just so adorable lol =] I really did like this poem, Its the kinda poem, that as you read it, you can picture it in your head. Great job 5/5

luv natalie x-x