Someone to Care

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Jul 6, 2005


O.K this is a very long poem but if you do read it Please leave a comment i would really appreciate it.

I know it's all up to me,
But how do I know who to believe?
Love or Evolution?
Which one should I believe?

Neither can be proved,
Neither one has my heart,
But I believe the one who listens,
And to me thats a start.

First week silence,
Second week came tears,
Then I spoke,
Let out all disbeliefs and fears.

How can there be a savior,
When in life theres so much hate?
How can there be a god,
When luck decides your fate.

When you lose a championship game,
Yet you know you could have won,
When your the one to blame,
Yet wrong you have not done.

Then how can it be all science,
when at a low you can find love,
Then how can it be science,
When you can find a Best friend even when your always made fun of.

It's hard not to believe,
When you see the mountains so high,
It's hard not to believe,
When beautiful rain drops fall from the sky.

My friend said to go far away,
Find your place on Earth,
Don't talk,
Find your worth.

I left advice,
I left me,
Looked back on everything,
And soon came to see.

There must be someone looking over,
Someone to make things right,
Someone to care,
When your crying through the night.

The years of haze,
The years of being lost,
And traveling through this maze,
Feeling forever being tossed,
Are all over.

Now it's clear,
No longer anything to fear,
I believe there is one Great,
I believe in my life it is not too late.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    good poem i liked it
    thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Symera

    All i can say is WOW! **claps** R u sure ur only 13 b/c u really are a great writer. If ur that young you still have many years expirence and intelligence and it can only get better over time.