Comments : Life Once More

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    That was really wonderful, well done, really really beautiful and sweet, it showed the emotions very well, good work

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Well said, Jacklyn.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!!

    5.5

    love & hugs

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    hey whassup ~lil slam~ nice work i know the feeling of seeing a friend slowly dying with a broken heart like that....it sucks sometimes you just feel helpless. sorry i'm worrying you lol! i'm doing well these days, just a bit tired here and there, started writing new stuff (and a brand new song!) but i won't post anything until it's finished so....yeah. :) Hope you are doing fine!! If you wanna talk lemme know, K? Love Yew Sooooooooo Much Gurl All of it From the Tips of My Toes (lol) Peace! //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Such a truthful poem. Those who care will always be by your side. Always.
    Love you hun,

    = Kalah