I'm speechless, this is one of the best suicide poems I have ever read, cause you wrote it so beautifully.....Perfect flow and rhyming....Great job, very emotional and touching!!!

*Hugs sabrina*

Welcome to the club

loved it =)

aww, i started crying, that's so sad, and wonderful, your so talented!!

Truly a great poem, I love the use of precious, it reminds me of Lord of the Ring, which somehow just seemed to make me feel more of the poem's emotion (dont ask me why lol). But it is a very good poem, and i am sure many can relate to it...The only thing i have to complain about is......
lol...I had to make it intense...yeah my complaint is that the highest vote i can give you is 5 :( ... but anyway thanks for the amazing read (25/5)

your amazin writer well done huni!!!!!!:D:D
keep it up ay

i agree. i really like this poem too...
So speak to me my precious
But speak without a sound
I ask of you, don’t wake me
While I’m lying on the ground
i love that bit. xx

Wow i loved it! you have amazing talent

Brooke

That was amazing, again. i loved it. it made me cry. I hope everythings ok, love me

This is an absolutely amazing poem, and i know i say that all the time, but this one really is, i wish i had your talent, and i hope that no one will ever read your suicide note next to your body because then you wouldn;t be able to indulge everyone on this site with your talent, and that would be unfair to waste such an amazing talent like yours. keep going and never leave. :)

xXx

This was really really good, and well written. i lk the part about speaking without a sound. 5/5

Excellent poem!!! very well written...just dont do it!!!

I liked it i think this one is very well writen and very deep .. good job and keep up the great work

This is really good i love to read your poems b/c they help me get thru my life i used to write poems but i havent been able to think latly got anything i could use like any topic? well keep up they great work and im glad you are still alive! always the best!
danni

Wow one of the best poems in the site... imadding u to my favs
i can totally relate
5/5
do leave ur comments on my poem "each night"
so next time i log in i'll read more of ur poems
love ur work
is so deep
love
amy

That Poem is Deep!!!I love the ending!!!

Just another comment in that book of appreciations...great poem!! ultimate!! m sorry.....but i m feeling speechless here!! great work once again!!

Great poem..im actually spechless...cant believe it...its beautifull..yet...deadly...dont do it. Yr on my favs list.
keep it up..keep strong.
XXX

I love your poems one day i hope that i can ryt as well as you plz read and comment on some of my poems id really like that...... but you are a great poet.....

Nice poem hun..i loved it but just wanted to hold that girl in my arms...heal her...i duno..very touching peice.
Much love xoxo

Wow this is increadably sad.. but wonderfuly written.. I love it.. I hope however that it is just a poem and it isnt real. As bad as things look now there is always a chance of sun over the rainbow u just gotta keep striving for it..

~Hayley J~