Great poem! One of my favorites!
Keep it up =D

I thought that was a cute poem! But i dont really understand it but its probably just me cuz i dont understand a lot of things! lol 5

AWWW that was a cute and beautifully written poem. I love how you put yourself In a childs voice. Great poem.

Take care,
Renee

You twisted it...first you were talking about Grandma and then you were saying Mommy...I'm a bit confused. Are you talking about a kid in heaven who is talking to their Mother down below? Hmmmm...I'm trying to figure this out.

I do like the story part of it and how you make everything so beautiful. That is what our perception of heaven is and it's great.

Nice write....

It's a little girl in heaven...talking to her mother. She says that Grandma is there. Grandma is dead too.....lol

~*~Christina~*~

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

great job 5/5 beautifully written!

nice job! keep it up!

aww this poem was really sad. but its really well written

this was definately a great poem! i got stuck from the beginning! i loved it alot!! great job definately! 5/5